Wow, I really don't usually read darkfic because I prefer happy endings...but because it's YOU, I read it and I'm glad I did. You have captured what it must be like to feel so helpless and hopeless in the face of overwhelming odds. I like the ending, it feels right, what else would happen? I don't understand why you don't feel you can post it on SH as they seem to take just about everything.
One quibble, this sentence The shriek had been Ginny Weasley, whose flaming hair clashed with the blood, and the thought of clashing with the your own essence made Harry want to vomit and laugh and cry all at once, but that would alert the parasites to his presence. seems to have an extra "the" in it.
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Date: 2005-09-03 02:54 pm (UTC)One quibble, this sentence The shriek had been Ginny Weasley, whose flaming hair clashed with the blood, and the thought of clashing with the your own essence made Harry want to vomit and laugh and cry all at once, but that would alert the parasites to his presence. seems to have an extra "the" in it.
I'm glad you're writing again!