Wow. This is really powerful. A really interesting pairing and I love how you did it, weaving the past and the present. The use of only dialogue for the flashbacks works really well, and I ADORE that you had James telling her about Azkaban. It’s just…perfect. It kind of pulls this all together and gives it a definite place in canon. Wonderful, wonderful work.
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Date: 2005-10-09 01:12 am (UTC)