Okay so maybe I'll post something little....

[januarium]

Yup, I know I said I'd calm down on the fic, but this drabble has been in my head trying to get out since Monday night.

Title: One and One and One and One
Pairing/s: M/W/P/P, pretty much
Summary: One and one and one and one do not make four, they simply make one and one and one and one.
Rating: PG 13/R
Words: 100
Notes: The 'one and one and one and one' thing comes from 'The Handmaid's Tale' by Margaret Attwood, which is utterly amazing.

One and One and One and One

One is Remus, who kisses James desperately, trying to get a taste of Sirius from him.

The next one is Peter, who knows that if he is still and says nothing one of the others might just touch him.

The one after that is Sirius, who sees Remus with James and cannot let himself show how much he cares.

The final one is James, who takes whatever they give, but still can’t feel connected to anything while Lily decides to ignore him.

They think together they make four, but really they are simply one and one and one and one.






I like doing drabbles, but was lucky with this. I just wrote down what I wanted it to be and that came to 101 words, so I only had to cut one!

Comments

[snegurochka_lee]

Oh, I love how the last line ties it all up - that's what a drabble is supposed to do, IMO, and something I have yet to master. Love it! Damn, I need a Marauders icon... :)

[dora-the-nymph.livejournal.com]

You really do *gets all jealous of paid account, even though I would be useless with one* Glad you liked it.

[islandsmoke.livejournal.com]

Very well done! Never tried a 100 worder, but imagine it's very difficult.

[dora-the-nymph.livejournal.com]

Thanks! It can be hard, but not always. I depends how well you know what you want to write, to me at least.

[annabellatrix.livejournal.com]

I love Marauder fic. And the last line is so perfect. I can sort of see them like that, together but then really not

...Ok. So I officialy make no sense. But, I tried.

<3!

[dora-the-nymph.livejournal.com]

I thought you made sense! But I usually make no sense myself, so who know. Glad you enjoyed.